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Another piece published!

January 16, 2010 by Icy Sedgwick 4 Comments

t is with great delight that I use this post to publicise the fact that I have another piece of fiction online! You can find it at The Tomlit Quarterly, in issue two. It’s available as a free PDF, which means not only do you get my short piece, Cold, you also get tons of other great work too!

I’m actually quite proud of Cold, mainly because it’s written mostly using dialogue. I’ve never been particularly good at writing convincing dialogue, because either all the characters sound like me, or they use English in the way that I’d write it, but not speak it. Writing dialogue is a tricky business since you either use slang and regional dialects to try and sketch the character more fully (which ends up sounding cheesy or fake), or everyone sounds interchangeable. Ideally, it should be possible to tell who’s talking without tagging the speech.

Whether I’ve succeeded in that is entirely up to you, but I’d love to hear your opinions!

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  1. Alex says

    January 17, 2010 at 12:16 am

    Hey Icy,

    Thanks for blogging about us. Just a little nit to pick, it is Tomlit Quarterly, not an Anthology.

    Glad to be working with you.
    All the best,
    Alex

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  2. Icy Sedgwick says

    January 17, 2010 at 12:45 am

    Thanks, just changed it.

    Icy

    Reply
  3. kathrynjankowski says

    January 17, 2010 at 8:41 pm

    I like it, Icy! You’ve given each character a distinctive voice. Good job.

    Reply
  4. Icy Sedgwick says

    January 17, 2010 at 9:18 pm

    @Kathryn – I’m glad you liked it! ^_^

    Reply

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Icy is a folklore blogger and host of the Fabulous Folklore podcast. She is based in the north east of England, where she was born and raised amid the folk tales and legends of Tyneside and Northumberland. Icy is fascinated by history, cinema, art, and the occult, and griffins will always be her favourite mythical beast. She also writes dark fantasy novellas, Gothic short stories and the occasional weird Western, and she holds a PhD in Film Studies!

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