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#FridayFlash – The Donor

January 9, 2015 by Icy Sedgwick 21 Comments

The Weighing of the Heart, from the British Museum

Awareness has been slow in coming to the corpse, but it explodes into life as it opens its eyes. Bandages cover its face, and it cannot see, but its fury gathers in its dormant muscles. Life sparks throughout its dead fibres, and it tears its right arm free from its wrappings. Cold fingers form hooks and rip the fabric away from its face. Its eyelids flicker, and its vision swings from blurry to pin sharp and back again. What on earth is going on?

The corpse realises it is not merely a corpse, it is a mummy. Just as it requested. Its heirs fulfilled its wishes. It would smile if it could remember how.

Realisation dawns, and the urge to smile splits in two. The process has gone awry. They have followed the procedure – up to a point. It concentrates, and performs an inventory of its body. Lungs and liver, both gone. Presumably resting in their designated canopic jars. But the stomach and intestines are still there – as is the brain. What? The brain should be gone, and there should be jars for the guts.

A chilling howl erupts from the throat of the corpse. The heart is missing. The only organ that should remain present after mummification is gone. Without the heart, it cannot pass into the Halls of Ma’at for the final judgment. Without the heart… I am doomed.

* * *

Max lies in the hospital bed. A drama plays out on the television, and women with spray tans gesticulate in silence since the sound is off. He barely pays attention, preferring instead to gaze out of the window at the blue sky, and the waving branches he can see wafting above the sill. Who needs soap operas when the world is so wonderful?

He doesn’t tire of the view, although he does tire of the hospital. He can’t wait until he can leave, but transplants are debilitating, and they want to make sure he’s well enough to be discharged. Edie visits daily, but he can’t wait until they can start their life again properly, at home.

The nurse enters as the last wisps of blue leave the sky, chased away by deep indigo and twinkling stars. She closes his blinds, insisting he needs to rest, and he chastises her for spoiling his view. She leaves the blinds closed, and stalks out. I don’t like her. She’s got a bedside manner like a bulldog.

Max drifts in and out of sleep until an hour before dawn. The hospital never truly shuts down, with the shouts of the stricken fighting with the moans of the dying. Still, in that quiet hour before the day begins again, the building finally approaches the nearest state to silence. Max lies back to enjoy this short bubble of peace.

Something moves in the corridor outside. Max looks to the door. Fabric is being dragged along the linoleum floor. A rhythmic thump between swooshes. Are they footsteps?

Max assumes an orderly is struggling with a patient, and resolves to ignore it. Moments later, the door handle rattles. Max reaches to his bedside table for the alarm button, but he cannot find it. Did I leave it there? The door handle suddenly slams down, and the door swings inward.

A figure stands silhouetted in the doorway, the rough approximation of a man, with fabric dangling from his limbs. It reminds him of the mummies in the old horror films that Edie loves to watch on late night TV. Is this some kind of a joke?

“Who are you?” calls Max.

The figure does not respond, and shuffles into the room, thudding its feet on the floor, dragging its wrappings behind it. Max tries to wriggle up onto his elbows, glancing about the room for the alarm button, but there’s no sign of it. He’s too weak to roll over to see if it’s fallen onto the floor.

Before he can reach under his pillow, the figure looms over him. It glares down at him, vivid green eyes peering out from between torn bandages. The skin around the eyes is waxy, and pale. Who the hell mummifies people in this day and age?

“What are you supposed to be, some kind of a joke?”

“No….joke….” The figure’s voice comes in rasps as it fights to draw breath into its body. It sounds like his father did, just before his 40-a-day habit finally killed him.

“Then what do you want?” Max knows he should feel afraid, but there is something too absurd about this to really worry him. Robert at the office probably hired an actor to liven up Max’s days.

“What…is….rightfully…mine….”

Before Max can react, the figure dives forward. Its fingers are more like talons than human digits, and it rams its hand into his chest. Fragile bone splinters, and blood wells up between the torn stitches. Max howls in pain. He tries to raise his arms to fend off another attack, but the figure is too quick. Its second punch breaks through, and Max feels his new heart torn free before he loses consciousness.

* * *

The mummy clutches its heart to its chest, the dead man in the bed forgotten. The bedroom disappears in a golden glow, and it is dimly aware of figures standing around it. Long fingers pry the heart from its grasp, and voices murmur around it. It longs to smile, or sing – its time has come. Its heart will be weighed and measured.

The glow fades, and a growl erupts in the shadows. Its blood would run cold if it had any.

I shouldn’t have killed that man…

Its heart is tossed into the shadows, where it disappears into the jaws of Ammut. The mummy falls to the floor, a crumpled heap of limbs and bandages. No afterlife awaits its soul, only an eternity of nothing.

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  1. Marc Nash says

    January 9, 2015 at 10:50 am

    The heart rejected him I guess.This was excellent, really bristling with associations and ideas. Thank you for introducing me to “canopic”

    Reply
    • Icy Sedgwick says

      January 14, 2015 at 10:35 pm

      The idea was that he needed his heart for the weighing ceremony, only it had been given to the donor. He figured he’d take it back, but murder made it to heavy in the final judgment.

      Reply
  2. David G Shrock says

    January 9, 2015 at 4:24 pm

    Take the heart and have emptiness, let the donor recipient live and remain trapped between this world and the afterlife, or wait for the man to grow old and test fortitude. I suppose one doesn’t always expect judgement after death between worlds. Nice story.

    Reply
    • Icy Sedgwick says

      January 14, 2015 at 10:36 pm

      He had expected judgment, that’s why he was so annoyed about the removal of his heart – the one thing he needed.

      Reply
  3. Larry Kollar says

    January 9, 2015 at 4:59 pm

    Ah, short-term thinking. Steal someone’s heart, someone’s life, so you can be judged… and what’s the verdict going to be? Good one all around, and I always do love your mummy stories!

    Reply
    • Icy Sedgwick says

      January 14, 2015 at 10:36 pm

      He didn’t steal the heart, he took his own heart back.

      Reply
  4. Feidor S. LaView says

    January 9, 2015 at 5:46 pm

    This has the flavor of a Creepshow episode, which I really, really love. Very nice story, Icy!

    Reply
    • Icy Sedgwick says

      January 14, 2015 at 10:38 pm

      Thanks!

      Reply
  5. ~Tim says

    January 9, 2015 at 5:59 pm

    I see a lesson we all might learn about taking what we think we need, yet have no right to. Nice work.

    Reply
    • Icy Sedgwick says

      January 14, 2015 at 10:38 pm

      He did have a right to the heart, it was his. I guess I didn’t make that clear.

      Reply
  6. Natalie Bowers says

    January 10, 2015 at 4:54 pm

    Oh dear. The mummy didn’t think that through properly, did he? Gripping tale. 🙂

    Reply
    • Icy Sedgwick says

      January 14, 2015 at 10:57 pm

      Thanks!

      Reply
  7. Katherine Hajer says

    January 11, 2015 at 12:41 am

    Aha, nice use of Egyptian mythology! Yeah, I don’t think offering the heart of a man you’d murdered would balance the scales in your favour.

    Reply
    • Icy Sedgwick says

      January 14, 2015 at 10:39 pm

      Well it was HIS heart in the first place. But no, murder wouldn’t help your case!

      Reply
  8. Sonia Lal says

    January 11, 2015 at 1:04 am

    Another great mummy tale!
    And now it’s too late for regrets, poor mummy!

    Reply
  9. Patricia Lynne says

    January 11, 2015 at 9:47 pm

    Great story, although, definitely not a happy ending for either.

    Reply
    • Icy Sedgwick says

      January 17, 2015 at 2:03 pm

      No, it’s a bad day at the office for them both!

      Reply
  10. Helen A. Howell says

    January 12, 2015 at 2:37 am

    I feel sorry for the mummy and for the man – sometimes what we think we need is not what we need at all.

    Reply
    • Icy Sedgwick says

      January 17, 2015 at 2:03 pm

      Well he did need his heart back in order to progress to the afterlife, he just didn’t think about the consequences.

      Reply
  11. ganymeder says

    January 16, 2015 at 11:54 am

    I fail to see why the idea of no afterlife is so bad? Let the poor heart recipient live! The mummy already had his/her chance.

    I really liked how the story went back between the two POVs. *shiver*

    Reply
    • Icy Sedgwick says

      January 17, 2015 at 2:06 pm

      Well if his heart is eaten by the Destroyer then his soul is lost for the rest of eternity. That was, by all accounts, a Very Bad Thing for the Egyptians!

      Reply

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