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The Lament (Flash Fiction)

December 12, 2024 by Icy Sedgwick 13 Comments

The bow scrapes across the strings, tentative at first, and faltering notes tumble into the twilight. As the prelude gives way to the melody, the bow glides back and forth, and delicate fingers caress the neck of the instrument. I remember those fingers, so long and pale, even in life.

The violin sings its mournful lament, and the early evening chill carries its melancholy song across the lake to where I stand on the shore. I remain perfectly poised, perfectly still. I am not the only audience for his song, for I sense spectres in the woods behind me, but I am the one for whom the song is intended.

He played this song for me some years ago, accompanied by a cellist. Their harmonies brought a tear to the eye of even a man so unmoveable as my father, and the humble violinist was to be my husband. How could I have known the source of such unfathomable talent?

Ripples break the calm surface of the water, and I sense they have arrived. They gave him his gift, and they took his life in payment, yet he defies them even now. They cannot touch him while he plays. It seems he is lost to me in life, but in death he continues to give away shards of his soul with each song. I look on with horror as his lament reaches its crescendo, and realisation dawns.

The music fades, and a heavy silence descends across the lake, rolling in with the mist. He has given me the last sliver of his soul. I stand in the cold night air, savouring the final notes as they continue to roll around inside my mind. Eventually I can remain no longer, and I turn to walk back up the shore, the spectres in the woods parting to let me pass.

My lips purse and I whistle a familiar tune, so doleful and full of sadness – his tune. I am so wrapped up in the melody that I do not hear movement in the water behind me. I do not hear them.

An image showing a frozen pond with two bullrushes sticking up in the foreground

 

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Filed Under: Flash Fiction Tagged With: fantasy, flash fiction, free story, friday flash, lament, music

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  1. Carrie Clevenger says

    December 12, 2014 at 1:49 pm

    Beautiful little piece here!

    Reply
    • Icy Sedgwick says

      December 14, 2014 at 1:45 pm

      Thanks!

      Reply
  2. Marc Nash says

    December 12, 2014 at 2:22 pm

    there was a real sensuality in the opening paragraphs describing the fingers on the bow

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    • Icy Sedgwick says

      December 14, 2014 at 1:58 pm

      Thank you!

      Reply
  3. David G Shrock says

    December 12, 2014 at 2:28 pm

    Beautiful. The opening sets the tone, and the piece carries through like a song.

    Reply
    • Icy Sedgwick says

      December 14, 2014 at 2:01 pm

      It was inspired by Nearer My God To Thee.

      Reply
  4. KjM says

    December 12, 2014 at 4:39 pm

    “…and the early evening chill carries its melancholy song across the lake to where I stand…”

    There’s a rhythm, a lilt, to this that greatly appeals. The entire piece has a melancholy well-suited to the melody your character describes.

    And the ending…perfect. Painful. But perfect.

    Great work, Icy.

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    • Icy Sedgwick says

      December 14, 2014 at 2:22 pm

      Thank you!

      Reply
  5. Helen A. Howell says

    December 13, 2014 at 3:31 am

    Beautifully written Icy!

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    • Icy Sedgwick says

      December 14, 2014 at 2:33 pm

      Thanks, Helen!

      Reply
  6. ~Tim says

    December 13, 2014 at 9:53 pm

    Moody and melancholy. I like it!

    Reply
    • Icy Sedgwick says

      December 14, 2014 at 2:33 pm

      One tries *bows*

      Reply
  7. Katherine Hajer says

    December 15, 2014 at 12:24 am

    Beautiful, definitely, but in the sense that a whirlpool or an avalanche is beautiful. The menace was also palpable. Neat spin on an Orpheus type of tale.

    Reply

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Icy is a folklore blogger and host of the Fabulous Folklore podcast. She is based in the north east of England, where she was born and raised amid the folk tales and legends of Tyneside and Northumberland. Icy is fascinated by history, cinema, art, and the occult, and griffins will always be her favourite mythical beast. She also writes dark fantasy novellas, Gothic short stories and the occasional weird Western, and she holds a PhD in Film Studies!

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