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#FridayFlash – The Unsaid Warning

February 14, 2018 by Icy Sedgwick 13 Comments

The young man shuffles into the workroom wearing the familiar despondent look. He looks at the floor and fiddles with the cuffs of his frock coat. Delta looks him up and down while his attention is fixed on the rug. His fine clothes and tidy hair give him away as a visitor to the Underground City. It would take saving for several years before many of its inhabitants could even afford his boot laces.

A witch solves a problem of heartbreak, but her unsaid warning will weigh heavy on her client. Click her to read more and visit the Underground City.
“What can I do for you?” asks Delta, although she already knows why he is here. There is only one reason why anyone ever visits her.

A witch solves a problem of heartbreak, but her unsaid warning will weigh heavy on her client. Click her to read more and visit the Underground City.

“I was, er, told that you, ah, have abilities,” replies the man. He will not meet her gaze, though she cannot decide if this is through embarrassment or shame.

“I do indeed, but it depends which of them you want. What brought you down to Limestone Alley?”

The young man finally looks up, and tears fill his brown eyes. Delta clucks and steers him to the reclining chair by the window. A gas lamp on the wall outside affords little light, and she lights fat pillar candles on the sill. The young man eyes the battered chair with suspicion, but she motions for him to sit.

“My price is a shilling,” she says.

“So small a price!” says the young man.

“Then you accept. Excellent. I’ll have to ask you to open your shirt a little.”

She turns away and gathers her supplies while the young man removes his silk cravat and unbuttons his shirt. Even the skin of his chest bears the pale golden glow of one used to sunlight. Delta glances at her own hands, so white even in candlelight. She wonders how sunlight feels on the skin. Is it warm? Does it hurt?

“This will sting a little,” she says, turning back to perch on the stool beside the chair.

“Compared to the pain I feel now, it will be nothing.”

He lies back and closes his eyes, but Delta notices his knuckles turn white as he grips the arms of the chair. She whispers a soothing lullaby, learned at her grandmother’s knee when she lived with the coven, and sets to work.

The young man gasps the first time the needles touches him, and he bites his lip to keep from complaining. Delta’s needle flashes back and forth, pulling the thread between her neat row of stitches. Moments later, the work is done, and she draws a sigil in the air above the young man’s chest.

“Oh my!” The young man looks down at his flawless chest, and presses a hand to his breastbone. The haunted, faraway look has fled from his eyes, replaced by warmth and friendliness. His handsome face cracks open in a broad grin.

“I take it Sir is pleased?”

“I am most impressed, my good woman!” He clambers out of the chair and does a jig across her narrow room.

“I am glad, sir.” Delta tidies away her tools while the young man marvels at his reclaimed love of life.

“You are a true marvel, really you are. Next time I have my heart broken, I shall know where to come!” He presses a shiny shilling into her hand and skips out of the room before Delta can stop him.

She thinks of running after him, but the sound of his footsteps has faded by the time she reaches the door. Her warning dies on her lips and she sits in her chair by the small grate, pulling her knitting into her lap.

Delta knows he will return when he realises that a mended heart will never break again – but nor will it love.


This story is set in the Underground City, the setting of my dark fantasy novella, The Necromancer’s Apprentice. Sign up below for a longer story and get magic, mayhem, and mummies in your inbox!

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  1. Eric J. Krause says

    March 15, 2013 at 4:08 am

    Excellent story. Great build up to a fantastic final line.

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  2. Sulci Collective says

    March 15, 2013 at 8:58 am

    nice work Icy, I’ve also written about a broken heart this week for friday flash, but um taken a different approach! Love how you can have the same broad theme and yet have so different approaches to it

    marc nash

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  3. Larry Kollar says

    March 15, 2013 at 12:11 pm

    Loved the closing—what an excellent lesson! Too bad he didn’t stay around to hear it.

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  4. Bevimus says

    March 15, 2013 at 12:24 pm

    Oh, lovely! I will definitely be checking out the underground city!

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  5. Icy Sedgwick says

    March 15, 2013 at 12:37 pm

    Eric – Thanks!

    Marc – Must be something in the air!

    Larry – Methinks he’s a bit of a fool…

    Bev – Hope you like it!

    Reply
  6. Tony Noland says

    March 15, 2013 at 1:24 pm

    Poor kid. The shortcut to healing is never better than the real thing. Proper scars take longer to form, but scar tissue is stronger than normal flesh, and way stronger than artfully installed sutures.

    Reply
  7. Beth McKinnon says

    March 15, 2013 at 2:08 pm

    I was pulled into the Underground City from the first few words. I am definitely going to read the rest.

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  8. Sonya Clark says

    March 15, 2013 at 4:24 pm

    This is an amazing world you’ve created!

    Reply
  9. Richard Bon says

    March 17, 2013 at 10:12 am

    Loved the build up and delivery in this one, Icy!

    Reply
  10. The Junkie says

    March 17, 2013 at 5:14 pm

    I love little gems and this is a little gem.

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  11. Helen says

    March 17, 2013 at 11:15 pm

    Oh poor man! Nice little twist to a story well told.

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  12. Katherine Hajer says

    March 18, 2013 at 3:26 am

    Loving the Underground City series. I also like how so many of the stories (all of them? can’t think of any exceptions) illustrate the economy of the place.

    Reply
  13. brainhaze says

    March 19, 2013 at 10:48 pm

    I love this Icy. The build up, the twist at the end and the whole concept. Brilliant, well done

    Reply

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Icy is a folklore blogger and host of the Fabulous Folklore podcast. She is based in the north east of England, where she was born and raised amid the folk tales and legends of Tyneside and Northumberland. Icy is fascinated by history, cinema, art, and the occult, and griffins will always be her favourite mythical beast. She also writes dark fantasy novellas, Gothic short stories and the occasional weird Western, and she holds a PhD in Film Studies!

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